Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Crushed (55 Fiction)


It began as a crush. An itsy-bitsy one. But, it slowly grew. From a small spark to a furious fire. In her heart. Except, she never told him. She kept her distance; she wasn’t gutsy enough. Hoping against hope that he would somehow come to know. And then, she saw…the other woman. She was crushed.

Post Script:
Amma, I know you will read this. Don't read too much into it. I'm NOT lovesick or anything.

14 comments:

  1. I know what a challenge it is to do 55 fiction but with no disrespect intended - I loved the PS :P

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    1. Hahaa, better to clarify things before itself right? :D
      Thanks, AS!

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  2. Nicely written.
    And I second what ^Atrocious Scribblings said.

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    1. Hi Ajay, appreciate your visiting my blog! Many thanks for the comment! :)

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  3. I agree with AS. The PS was the best part. :p

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    1. Spiff!!! Should not give Amma any ideas, right? :P

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  4. Ha ha! Love the PS! :)

    And I loved the story too, nice play on words. ♥

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    1. Thank you so much Kitty chechi :) Great to see you on my blog!

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  5. Hahaha The PS is hilarious :P

    And the post was simple and sweet. Nice :)

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    1. CS, thank you so much :) Added the PS as an afterthought actually- was just wondering what Amma would think, and then quickly decided to clarify :D

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  6. lmao.. the P;S caught my attention :D ...;) ...

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    1. Menachery, thank you for visiting my blog! Really appreciate it :)

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  7. Hehe, very vital PS. :D Very cute too.

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    1. Sumitra, long time no see! Hahaa, the PS was important indeed. Better to establish some things before hand. :P

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Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Crushed (55 Fiction)


It began as a crush. An itsy-bitsy one. But, it slowly grew. From a small spark to a furious fire. In her heart. Except, she never told him. She kept her distance; she wasn’t gutsy enough. Hoping against hope that he would somehow come to know. And then, she saw…the other woman. She was crushed.

Post Script:
Amma, I know you will read this. Don't read too much into it. I'm NOT lovesick or anything.

14 comments:

  1. I know what a challenge it is to do 55 fiction but with no disrespect intended - I loved the PS :P

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hahaa, better to clarify things before itself right? :D
      Thanks, AS!

      Delete
  2. Nicely written.
    And I second what ^Atrocious Scribblings said.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi Ajay, appreciate your visiting my blog! Many thanks for the comment! :)

      Delete
  3. I agree with AS. The PS was the best part. :p

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Spiff!!! Should not give Amma any ideas, right? :P

      Delete
  4. Ha ha! Love the PS! :)

    And I loved the story too, nice play on words. ♥

    ReplyDelete
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    1. Thank you so much Kitty chechi :) Great to see you on my blog!

      Delete
  5. Hahaha The PS is hilarious :P

    And the post was simple and sweet. Nice :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. CS, thank you so much :) Added the PS as an afterthought actually- was just wondering what Amma would think, and then quickly decided to clarify :D

      Delete
  6. lmao.. the P;S caught my attention :D ...;) ...

    ReplyDelete
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    1. Menachery, thank you for visiting my blog! Really appreciate it :)

      Delete
  7. Hehe, very vital PS. :D Very cute too.

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    1. Sumitra, long time no see! Hahaa, the PS was important indeed. Better to establish some things before hand. :P

      Delete